Introduction critique

Refer to: <a href="/node/1357">New Introduction (part II)</a>.<br /><br />Needs a few edits but the concept you're portraying is super.  Do we have any canon info about the Eorna, or are you operating off speculation?  I personally don't know much about that ancient race, but that my be my lack of sufficient material.

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